correcting a short story
August 9th, 2016- Radio Name is presently an online radio station with a mission to deliver your favorite music and more to you whenever and wherever you find yourself in the world.
Search or browse on web for any radio stations of your favourite country.
domainname is a radio directory has more than 7.000 stations from all countries on world.
Radio Name is an online radio station with a mission to deliver your favorite music to you anywhere. You can search for your favorite radio station on the website!
Domainname is a radio directory with more than 7,000 stations from around the world. The first two sentences flow smoothly, but the last one feels forced.
Favorite = American spelling.
Favourite = British spelling.
You shouldn’t use both, Use only one of em.
I’d say any of these would be good:
StationName is an online radio station which focuses on the classics (80s & 90s hits)
StationName is an online radio station which plays chillout music.
StationName is an online radio station which plays R&B music.
StationName is an online radio station made to bring sweet music to your ears!
StationName is an online radio station with a mission to bring you the latest pop music, wherever you are.
StationName is an online radio station with a mission to bring you the latest hits, wherever you are.
Can’t give you a definitive one, It all depends on what it’s gonna be broadcasting.
I don’t think it’s proper to say it’d deliver “your favorite music” because it’s subjective and people have different tastes.
Personally, I like the 4th one best.
2nd:
Search or browse the web for radio stations world-wide.
I agree with on the 3rd one.
How this:
– Radio Name is an online radio station with a mission to deliver you your favorite music whenever and wherever you want it
– Search or browse the web for radio stations from a country of your choice
– domainname is a radio directory that consists of over 7,000 radio stations from all across the globe