Need help writing English Essay

I’m gonna write a English essay about ” Appearance is important but one should judge others by the way they look”
How many points do u think that i should mention in my essay ? What are they ? I have just thought about some main ideas but they are not enough so I think that u guys could help me. Thanks
Edit : sorry guys , i forgot one word ” Appearance is important but one should not judge others by the way they look”
Answer #1
Firstly the premise ” Appearance is important but one should judge others by the way they look” – makes absolutely no sense, you say appearance is important BUT people should focus on it – is “but” meant to be there?
Answer #2
I think if you switched “one should” around to “should one”, that would be a better question. As you’re just making a statement.
Answer #3
beauty is only skin deep ?
Answer #4
Sure your prompt is right?
But english, you need a strong introduction/contention that generally addresses your main points (for an hour of writing, only 3 points needed). Then three paragraphs discussing the prompt (for or against or both) and a conclusion.
Answer #5
Appearance is everything,
Dont ever forget that.
Your not going to bother talking to someone who is a minger, so unless there attractive I dont waste my time.
Answer #6
*googles minger*
Answer #7
sorry guys , i forgot one word “” Appearance is important but one should not judge others by the way they look”
Answer #8
Moving